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  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Mystery / Suspense Re: operation imperial [prologue]

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. First off, I know the others have already mentioned that it is quite obvious that the guy Ratan is committing suicide and ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Rememberance Prologue

    hey there! First of all let me tell you that this particular piece worked really great as a prologue. I can agree that this is a perfect example of dystopian ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: If There Was No Tomorrow (Chapter 1: Addison)

    Hey there! I was looking for exactly something like this to read. Don't really know how much of it I can review but I tell you this was just fabulous ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Perfect Thief Chapter 2

    Hey Gaurav! Budding writer here for a review. The others have already gone over on the nitpicks dealing with grammar so I'll just leave that part out and focus on ...

    May 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: My life

    Hey there! I'm really not going to say that what i'm writing is a review. I mean what you wrote was pure human emotion and that doesn't really deserve a ...

    May 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Remembering you was only but a dream.

    Hey there! I see that this is the first poem you have posted. Its quite good and i liked the way you brought out the emotions, of losing and trying ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Don't Forget Our Past

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! Let me start by saying that I liked the pace with which you wrote the story and it was just what it ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Dandelions and Aimless Wings

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. So here it goes: Firstly let me say your title is quite catchy and something really random so thats good. Because it ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Bad things happen in slow motion

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. First off I'm not really good at reviewing poems but the title was so interesting that i could not resist! So here ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Fat Cat

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. I really don't review poems but the title was so funny that i couldn't resist! I totally loved your sense of humor ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: A secret waiting to be told

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! I must tell you I thoroughly liked this piece! It was very intriguing and quite captivating to me. The concept of a ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Culture Re: Eyes Wide Shut 1.1 (Edited)

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! Let me start by saying that I loved the feel of your story and the way you have progressed with it but ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Perfect Thief Chapter 1

    Hey there! I finally got around to reviewing chapter 1 after reading the prologue. Keeping in mind how the prologue ended i would say this is a perfect beginning to ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Perfect Thief Prologue

    Budding writer here for a review! As a prologue it was quite nice but i really felt that you have made it a bit longer just to give a more ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: -

    OK so how should I start? I will just start by saying WOW! That was totally unexpected. I mean really who would have thought that it would end this way! ...

    May 2, 2014


The very worst use of time is to do very well what need not be done at all.
— Benjamin Tregoe