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Re: operation imperial [prologue]
Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. First off, I know the others have already mentioned that it is quite obvious that the guy Ratan is committing suicide and ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: Rememberance Prologue
hey there! First of all let me tell you that this particular piece worked really great as a prologue. I can agree that this is a perfect example of dystopian ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: If There Was No Tomorrow (Chapter 1: Addison)
Hey there! I was looking for exactly something like this to read. Don't really know how much of it I can review but I tell you this was just fabulous ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: The Perfect Thief Chapter 2
Hey Gaurav! Budding writer here for a review. The others have already gone over on the nitpicks dealing with grammar so I'll just leave that part out and focus on ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: My life
Hey there! I'm really not going to say that what i'm writing is a review. I mean what you wrote was pure human emotion and that doesn't really deserve a ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Remembering you was only but a dream.
Hey there! I see that this is the first poem you have posted. Its quite good and i liked the way you brought out the emotions, of losing and trying ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Don't Forget Our Past
Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! Let me start by saying that I liked the pace with which you wrote the story and it was just what it ...
May 4, 2014 -
Re: Dandelions and Aimless Wings
Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. So here it goes: Firstly let me say your title is quite catchy and something really random so thats good. Because it ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Bad things happen in slow motion
Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. First off I'm not really good at reviewing poems but the title was so interesting that i could not resist! So here ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Fat Cat
Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. I really don't review poems but the title was so funny that i couldn't resist! I totally loved your sense of humor ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: A secret waiting to be told
Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! I must tell you I thoroughly liked this piece! It was very intriguing and quite captivating to me. The concept of a ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 1.1 (Edited)
Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! Let me start by saying that I loved the feel of your story and the way you have progressed with it but ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: The Perfect Thief Chapter 1
Hey there! I finally got around to reviewing chapter 1 after reading the prologue. Keeping in mind how the prologue ended i would say this is a perfect beginning to ...
May 2, 2014 -
Re: The Perfect Thief Prologue
Budding writer here for a review! As a prologue it was quite nice but i really felt that you have made it a bit longer just to give a more ...
May 2, 2014 -
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OK so how should I start? I will just start by saying WOW! That was totally unexpected. I mean really who would have thought that it would end this way! ...
May 2, 2014
