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  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Mystery / Suspense Re: operation imperial [prologue]

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. First off, I know the others have already mentioned that it is quite obvious that the guy Ratan is committing suicide and ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Rememberance Prologue

    hey there! First of all let me tell you that this particular piece worked really great as a prologue. I can agree that this is a perfect example of dystopian ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: If There Was No Tomorrow (Chapter 1: Addison)

    Hey there! I was looking for exactly something like this to read. Don't really know how much of it I can review but I tell you this was just fabulous ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Perfect Thief Chapter 2

    Hey Gaurav! Budding writer here for a review. The others have already gone over on the nitpicks dealing with grammar so I'll just leave that part out and focus on ...

    May 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: My life

    Hey there! I'm really not going to say that what i'm writing is a review. I mean what you wrote was pure human emotion and that doesn't really deserve a ...

    May 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Remembering you was only but a dream.

    Hey there! I see that this is the first poem you have posted. Its quite good and i liked the way you brought out the emotions, of losing and trying ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Don't Forget Our Past

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! Let me start by saying that I liked the pace with which you wrote the story and it was just what it ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Dandelions and Aimless Wings

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. So here it goes: Firstly let me say your title is quite catchy and something really random so thats good. Because it ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Bad things happen in slow motion

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. First off I'm not really good at reviewing poems but the title was so interesting that i could not resist! So here ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Fat Cat

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review. I really don't review poems but the title was so funny that i couldn't resist! I totally loved your sense of humor ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: A secret waiting to be told

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! I must tell you I thoroughly liked this piece! It was very intriguing and quite captivating to me. The concept of a ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Culture Re: Eyes Wide Shut 1.1 (Edited)

    Hey there! Budding writer here for a review! Let me start by saying that I loved the feel of your story and the way you have progressed with it but ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Perfect Thief Chapter 1

    Hey there! I finally got around to reviewing chapter 1 after reading the prologue. Keeping in mind how the prologue ended i would say this is a perfect beginning to ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Perfect Thief Prologue

    Budding writer here for a review! As a prologue it was quite nice but i really felt that you have made it a bit longer just to give a more ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: -

    OK so how should I start? I will just start by saying WOW! That was totally unexpected. I mean really who would have thought that it would end this way! ...

    May 2, 2014


Revision is one of the exquisite pleasures of writing.
— Bernard Malamud